Best I've Ever Written

So, this is supposedly, according to my creative writing professor, the best I've ever written. It's a small paragraph in which we had to introduce a character. Here it goes:

Hendrix was a God. As simple as that. Trying to tell him otherwise would call for an hour long tyraid about how wrong you were. And then Cobain was his Jesus. He was the salvation to the music world, with his flannl shirt, sticker covered guitar, and his bad-ass, don't give a shit, fuckin' rap me attitude songs about the world. These were the men to admire. Their songs were his doctrine, the guitar was his idol, and music was his passion. Hendrix is God and Cobain is Jesus.